Clodiuth-Matrix's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Espeon]

Did it fall into the water?

Because it's fur is really messed up. Look up pictures of animals and stuff before you just go and do fur next time, okay? And the background is really lacking in things, blades of grass for instance? And the is that the sun or the moon? Can't really tell.

Yuujikon responds:

Like i said, it wasnt the bes of the group. I kinda rushed this one to

[Christmas Gift]

Eh...

The anatomy is really off. It's EVERYWHERE, and it's just not minor little flaws, it's very apparent. Firstly her calves are a bit to long, oh her thighs are too short. The left arm (her right actually) is long than the right arm (her left). The hand is...all sorts of wrong really. Mainly thanks to the index finger. Collar is too high as well.
Lastly, the colors aren't really that welcoming. Mainly in the background. The tree doesn't even have that much effort put into it, and I know people can get pretty lazy on background, but if you are at least blur it. This will take the focus off of it. The presents perspectives are WAAAY of. They're not even perfect cubes.
I could go on, but I'm sure you go the idea by now.
Hope you had a happy holidays.

bocodamondo responds:

heh . thanks for the critic ^^.
i keep that in mind for next time ;)